I think the main focus of my essay is addressing the concern I have with the food industry and what can be done to change some of the awful things that are happening, such as to the farmers, at slaughterhouses, and even at grocery stores. I have really pondered Michael Pollan's question "What should we have for dinner?" and I have found not even a single answer but many theories leading to answers and more that lead to more questions similar to his.
There is so much more I want to learn about the food industry and what we are putting in our bodies, I really believe that this is one of the most important topics I have ever had covered in a course before. Not only is food something we need to survive, but on top of that it amazes me how it affects many other aspects of our lives such as the economy, the need for new vaccines because new bacteria is being introduced through foods, the environment which is being destroyed by these corporations, and even my future career as a dentist because what we eat affects our teeth and what can affect our teeth can certainly affect other parts of our bodies!
As you can see, I will probably ramble, it's too difficult to choose only one aspect only to discuss. But since this is a personal essay and my personal mind is racing with
thoughts about this topic I think my ramble will be okay and hopefully it will really express everything that is on my mind now that I have learned so much.
I always wonder if I'm rambling in my papers for class too, but I'm really glad we can write freely in this course. I don't think you will have any issues. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteI was in a similar boat writing mine. I had to keep going back to rewrite the parts where I rambled a little bit too long. I like the ideas you're considering to write about, good luck finishing it up!
ReplyDeleteWhile taking this class I have also come up with a lot of concerns I have with the food industry. A lot of things I never even thought about before.
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